Subject: Practice News Story 4: Court
Posted: 4:45 p.m. MT Sept. 26, 2007
Church Burglary will take two to Court
Logan, UT – Preliminary hearing has determined that James Michaels (35) and an undisclosed minor will face 2 misdemeanor charges of breaking and entering and vandalism as well as 1 felony burglary charge. This preliminary hearing, held to determine if there is enough evidence to continue with a trial, was held on Sept 26th, 2007.
On Sept 19th, the accused were arrested with evidence that they burglarized a meetinghouse of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints. Sheriff Deputy Geoffrey Hasty made the arrest late that same night.
The suspects came peacefully and according to the District Attorney Noel Mayfield, “[They were] cooperative, yet firm on the fact they are not guilty.”
You had a very nice flow to your article, and I especially liked how you incorporated your quote at the end of your story.
ReplyDeleteI think you might have misspelled the Sheriff Deputy’s first name. Other than that minor error your article was great. Good job!